Comments on: I need help with my book, opinions, please read? http://www.otr-site.com/old-time-radio-drama/i-need-help-with-my-book-opinions-please-read.html Old Radio Episodes Mon, 31 Jan 2011 20:39:06 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=3.8.41 By: Sapphire http://www.otr-site.com/old-time-radio-drama/i-need-help-with-my-book-opinions-please-read.html#comment-395 Sun, 10 Oct 2010 15:06:43 +0000 http://www.otr-site.com/old-time-radio-drama/i-need-help-with-my-book-opinions-please-read.html#comment-395 The whole thing about it being painful for her wings to emerge from her skin and when they are retracted, her skin heals, is a complete rip off from the X-Men – Wolverine did the exact same thing with his claws.

Other than that, it sounds like an ok story line, but I’m not really into the whole angel thing – I think it’s a bit overused.

]]> By: Goddess of Chocolate http://www.otr-site.com/old-time-radio-drama/i-need-help-with-my-book-opinions-please-read.html#comment-394 Sat, 09 Oct 2010 16:34:04 +0000 http://www.otr-site.com/old-time-radio-drama/i-need-help-with-my-book-opinions-please-read.html#comment-394 Reminds me of a game called Disgaea which is about angels and demons. You may want to type it in google for details as the plot is a bit complicated for me to explain on yahoo.

However it sounds really great you could have fun writing this.
Also try not to make the angels use their magic every single time they want to get out of tough spots because that makes it dull but other than that just start writing!

Good Luck! :)

]]> By: chocolatelover727 http://www.otr-site.com/old-time-radio-drama/i-need-help-with-my-book-opinions-please-read.html#comment-393 Wed, 06 Oct 2010 21:34:01 +0000 http://www.otr-site.com/old-time-radio-drama/i-need-help-with-my-book-opinions-please-read.html#comment-393 It sounds like a fantastic idea. There are probably similar stories out there, but if you make it your own, you shouldn’t have a problem. I really love the tattoo idea, and your characters seem very interesting and believable. Definitely continue with this.

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