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Everyday (You Save My Life)

Jamie was so excited. She was about to meet her favorite comedian, actor, and author, Craig Ferguson. She was driving to the place where he’d be. She was wearing dark blue jeans and a tee-shirt that had a picture of Craig on it and beneath the picture it said “Remind you of anyone……”. She loved the shirt and wore it frequently.

A few minutes later she arrived at the theater. She got out of her car and walked inside. She had a backstage pass that she’d won on the radio. She showed her pass to the security guard and he walked her to Craig’s dressing room.

When she got there, she walked inside to see Craig talking with other fans. He looked kind of cute. He was wearing jeans, a black button-down shirt and yellow boots. His hair was spiky. Jamie walked over to him.

She looked up at him to see his blue eyes staring back at her. He smiled at her. She smiled back and blushed.

“Hi” Craig said.

“Hi” she said, shyly.

“How are you doing tonight?” he asked.

“Good” was all she could say.

“That’s good” he said. “How old are you?”

“I’m 39″ she said, quietly.

“What’s your name?” he asked.

“My name is Jamie” she said.

“That name’s almost as pretty as you” he said.

Jamie blushed.

“Thanks” she said, quietly.

Just then it was time for the fans to take their seats. Everyone said there goodbyes to Craig, before going to take their seats. Jamie turned to leave, but Craig stopped her.

“Would you like to go out with me tonight?” he asked.

“Like a date?” she asked.

“Yeah” he said.

Why would he want to go out on a date with me she thought to herself.

“Ummm” she said. “Sure. Sounds Like Fun”

“Great” he said. “I’ll meet you outside after the show”

“Okay” she said smiling. She turned and walked out the door and to her seat.

Craig was on fire that night. He did his usually stuff about Brad Pitt and James Bond and Oprah and drugs and concerts. Jamie was laughing the whole time. She couldn’t help it. He was so funny. Eventually, the show came to an end. Jamie exited the theater with everyone else. She stood by the back door and waited for Craig.

Craig walked out of the theater a few minutes later. He greeted some other fans before walking over to her and hugging her.

Hey” he said, his accent coming through a little. “You ready to go”

Jamie smiled and nodded her head ‘yes’. Craig opened the limo door for Jamie. She got in, followed by Craig. The limo driver started driving.

“Where are we going?” Jamie asked, curiously.

“It’s a surprise” he said. “You’ll have to wait and see”

“Okay” she said.

“It may take awhile to get there” he said.

“Okay” she said. “We can just chat”

“About what?” Craig asked.

“Umm” she said. “What do you like to do besides comedy?”

Craig was surprised that she actually wanted to get to know him. Usually women just used him for *** and money. He smiled at her. She blushed and smiled back.

“Well” he said. “I like to travel back to Scotland when I can. I also like to visit my family or just watch a movie at home and relax”

“Oh” she said. “I have never been to Scotland. I’ve seen pictures, though. It looks beautiful. I’d love to go there one day”

“So” he said. “What about you? What do you like to do when you’re not going to one of my shows?”

“Well” she said thinking. “I love to sing and dance and just have fun and hang out with friends”

“Could you sing something for me?” he asked.

Jamie blushed and got really nervous. She shook her head ‘no’.

“Why not?” he asked.

“Because” she said. “I said I like to sing. I didn’t say I could sing. And I’m too nervous”

“You have a nice voice” he said. “And you don’t have to be nervous around me”

I know” she said. “I just am nervous around you”

“Why?” Craig asked.

“Because” she said. “Your my favorite comedian and author and actor”

“Oh” he said. “So you’ve read my book?”

“Yes” she said, shyly. “I actually have your book”

“So you’ve probably heard that I have an autobiography coming out soon” he said.

“Yeah” she said. “I pre-ordered it, but I really can’t wait until the sequel to “Between the Bridge and the River” comes out. I love that book
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Asked by:KatieL


  1. Laurence T says:

    not bad, not perfect. 3.5 – 4 stars out of 5 :D

  2. Harinath says:

    good story.new thinking.i enjoyed it.

  3. Rena says:

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